I have been trying to develope characters from a story I am working on, just trying to get a feel for who they are and what they look like, and this is Rachel. The concept for the story is the first superhero team in history and how the journey of ordinary people and how they decide to come together to be a team. I don't really think that any comic has ever really explained the rationale or logic behind becoming a superhero very well, or the logisitics of it. Anyway, Rachel is your girl next door character with a full-figure and lots of personality. She is telekinetic and telepathic. C&C strongly encouraged.
Looks good. You've really improved with drawing the figure. The only thing I'd say is that some sort of background would be nice to really get the sense that she's flying. It doesn't have to be super-detailed. Some silhouetted buildings would be nice.
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"Once you draw someone you will always look at that person in a differently light, maybe with more honesty." `nimra
Yea I should have drawn a background, but I worked so hard on getting the figure right that I kind of forgot to. I think I may go back in and add one though. Thanks for the comment
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